Review: Sleepsong

Sleepsong
By George Ella Lyon
Illustrated by Peter Catalanotto
Atheneum Books for Young Readers
December 2008
40 pages

Sleepsong is a marvelous book about the bedtime ritual. The top half of each 2-page spread contains colorful illustrations showing a little girl getting ready for bed. Across the bottom of those pages are dreamlike illustrations of lots of different animals sleeping. These enchanting images tell a story within a story. The simple, rhythmic prose, which can be read or sung, is the perfect accompaniment to the stories unfolding across the pages.

My 7-year old granddaughter read this book and loved it. Since she doesn’t read music, she made up her own tune.

Sleepsong is a timeless bedtime story filled with reassurance that all is right with the world.

Copyright (c) 2008 by Peggy Tibbetts

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Happy Holidays!

Wishing you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Peggy and Tod, Venus and Zeus along the West Elk Ski Trail

Peggy and Tod, Venus and Zeus along the West Elk Ski Trail

I will be taking a break from blogging through the holidays. But I will be back in the new year with new book reviews, markets, contests, and more valuable information from Advice from a Caterpillar.
 
Get out and enjoy the season!
 
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Where can I find statistics to include in my cover letter?

I’m using How to Publish Your Children’s Book
by Liza Burby, and the
Children’s Writer’s & Illustrator’s Market to help me submit my first book. In Burby’s book, Chapter 5 is about the submissions package. The author recommends including information to indicate the potential size of my book’s audience. The example is: “The popularity of middle grade fantasy novels … accounts for 40 percent of all book sales in the middle grade category in 2005.” Where can I find statistics to include in my cover letter?

The question is: Why do you need to provide the publisher with book industry statistics? Editors already have current information available to them. Writers aren’t expected to provide statistics. In fact it’s possible that if you do include book industry statistics in your cover letter, the editor might think you are showing off, or trying to tell her about the business. Generally speaking, you have no idea about the individual on the receiving end of your cover letter and manuscript. Proceed with professionalism.

I’m not familiar with Burby’s book. I usually recommend Harold Underdown’s The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Publishing Children’s Books He is a children’s book editor and recommends keeping your cover letter simple. Include the title of your manuscript and “a brief and tempting description of your manuscript”.

He also adds that you should not include: your resume, marketing plan, endorsements, apologies, or a lengthy plot summary. In my own submissions I do include my resume, but on a separate sheet. Underdown’s point is, if you don’t have a long resume yet, it’s okay not to include one. I would also add that if you’re a member of SCBWI, be sure to mention that in your cover letter or resume.

I say forget about book industry statistics. Keep your query and/or submission simple and focused on your book, and the story you are telling. That’s the best way to attract an editor’s attention.

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Review: What I Saw and How I Lied

What I Saw And How I Lied
By Judy Blundell
Scholastic Press
November 2008
288 pages

When Evie’s stepfather Joe returns to Queens from World War II, she and her mom Beverly are so relieved he’s alive they don’t question where the money came from to start a chain of appliance stores. They’re so happy to have him at home, they ignore the changes in him. When he drags them off to Palm Beach, Florida, on a whim they pretend that everything is perfectly normal. What Evie and her mom choose not to see is as plain as day to the reader. That all is not what it seems.

Blundell meticulously knits the compelling theme into the fabric of the story. From Peter, the mysterious young man whom Evie falls head over heels for, to the Graysons who are hiding a secret, to a shocking mystery involving her parents. All along the reader can see there’s something wrong with this picture while waiting for Evie to wake up and smell the coffee.

It’s easy to see how What I Saw And How I Lied won the National Book Award. From the very first page, it’s like stepping into a classic film noir. I love books that come to life on the movie screen in my head and this one does that for me. Yet it’s more than a visual experience. Blundell takes a hard-boiled mystery and jazzes it up with sexual intrigue and a vulnerable – albeit at times clueless – heroine in Evie. Read it with a bowl of popcorn!

Copyright (c) 2008 by Peggy Tibbetts

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